Final feedback and amendments

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Here is our final feedback from our tutor Based on what we had a few posts ago. The reason to these changes are as followed:

  • Change the title as it may confuse the audience, you should keep it looking as dar as possible and not include any light elements within this poster.Screen Shot 2018-02-06 at 11.53.51
  • Reduce the amount of information within both posters as you want the image to do most the talking and if there is confusion then the viewers will look to the fact sheet. Change the hierarchy too of the layout just to experiment a little more.

    Doing this really did favour us and I feel that it works effectively and was incredibly good advice.

  • Change all profits to just profits as that we are unsure on the fact that all profits go to distant executives but do know that some profit goes to them. Screenshots above show evidence of the change.
  • Stress a little more on the local economy in the light poster, doing so reinforces the message that we are trying to send out and reduces potential confusion from the audience.Screen Shot 2018-02-06 at 12.08.17
  • Do not pixelate the Starbucks logo as people may think that it is a slip up in the design or it is a mistake. I was against this opinion but realised that our tutor is also our audience/ client so we should construct on the feedback given no matter what our opinion means. I understood where she was coming from so we chose to make the change. Screenshots from above show the change.

It was also mentioned that we should have a title panel for the display. This is to reduce confusion as people may find the display being two separate displays even if the styles do match.

This feedback has strongly helped us and I feel that it was crucial to get towards the end of the brief. Constant feedback is always needed and is key for professional practise. Next I will be showing photos of the display if ours goes up and also the PDF files.

Moving on

Moving over to finally piecing together a solid piece of work our group decided to brainstorm some ideas and started to think on what and how we should work on our display. Our group was a person down but we were still strong and confident to carry on short and let our other member know as soon as she was back.

So my new idea didn’t go to plan because I had been thinking about it for a while now and I really thought that it probably wouldn’t work because we are pretty short on time unfortunately. The idea was to be a video piece that is available to users when they go into a supermarket, the video directs the user through a virtual reality of a market street in London full of good vibes and friendly faces. The video will guide the viewer through the market street on the phone and making sure that it is safe to in the audiences whereabouts being a supermarket full of doom and gloom. I thought this would be a fantastic way on getting people to convert to going to farmers markets instead of big named supermarkets.

I loved my idea but unfortunately I felt the rest of the team wouldn’t be so sure on the idea. I’m not fussed though as I would like to work on something like this in the future as I feel it would probably take a huge impact. Also a lot more time would be needed to put into it and I also considered everyones learning outcomes and thought it would not work in their advantage.

Moving on we told each other how we wanted the final piece to look like, we wanted it to stand out from the others, be bold and striking, start up a conversation. So we came up with an idea to focus on the subject we had picked a few days ago and strongly focus on the point to get locals to get their coffee from independent traders instead of the likes of Starbucks and Costa.

We had to find facts and fast to get people to want to change where they go. We done some group research and found some interesting facts about how money going into big brands such as Starbucks is ending up in the pockets of distant executives, not the local economy. Also how big names have only just decided to increase their purchases of fair trade coffee when they are earning millions. And another one I thought was needed to be seen was the fact that Starbucks uses non organic milk from factory farms.

Moving on from finding some facts I will critically discuss our methods of designing our display and marketing our campaign in my next blog.